Iterations to bulk onboarding after round 2 UR

app/views/apply/contact-details-chain.html

@@ -15,20 +15,25 @@
 
       <h1 class="nhsuk-heading-l">{{ pageName }}</h1>
 
-      <p>You can add up to 10 lead administrators now, including you.</p>
+      <p>You can assign up to 10 lead administrators now, including you, for the {{ data.pharmacyIds | length }} pharmacies you selected.</p>
 
-      <p>The lead administrators will:</p>
-
-      <ul>
-        <li>get access to RAVS for all {{ data.pharmacyIds | length }} pharmacies</li>
-        <li>be able to create reports for all {{ data.pharmacyIds | length }} pharmacies</li>
-        <li>be able to add more users at each pharmacy and choose their permission level</li>
-      </ul>
+      <p>You will be able to add more users later at individual pharmacies, including more lead administrators.</p>
+
+      <p>The people you add now must have an nhs.net email. But when you add further users later, we allow a wide range of email addresses.</p>
 
       {% call details({
-        summaryText: "About our permission levels"
-      }) %}
-        <p>As a lead administrator, you can add more lead administrators, administrators or recorders.</p>
+  summaryText: "What can you do as a lead administrator?",
+  classes: "nhsuk-expander"
+}) %}
+  <p>A lead administrator added here can:</p>
+  <ul>
+    <li>access RAVS at all {{ data.pharmacyIds | length }} selected pharmacies </li>
+    <li>add users at each pharmacy, including more lead administrators, who can in turn add further users </li>
+    <li>assign different permission levels to the users they add </li>
+    <li>create reports that include all {{ data.pharmacyIds | length }} pharmacies </li>
+  </ul>
+
+<p>This table shows the permission levels you can assign when you add users at individual pharmacies.</p>
 
 <table tabindex="0" class="nhsuk-table">
 <thead class="nhsuk-table__head">
@@ -143,4 +148,5 @@ <h2 class="nhsuk-heading-m">{{ ordinals[index] }} lead administrator</h2>
     </div>
   </div>
 
+
 {% endblock %}

app/views/apply/group-of-pharmacies.html

@@ -14,12 +14,12 @@
     <div class="nhsuk-grid-column-two-thirds">
 
       <h1 class="nhsuk-heading-l">{{ pageName }}</h1>
+
+      <p>You can onboard all your pharmacies at once, or you can do it in batches. The best way to do this depends on your operating model.</p>
 
-      <p>You can sign up all of your pharmacies at once, or you can do it in batches.</p>
+      <p>Before you start, we strongly recommend you read our <a href="#">guide to signing up for a group of pharmacies</a>.</p> 
 
-      <p>For larger chains, we recommend signing up pharmacies based on how stores are managed in your organisation. <!-- See our <a href="#">guide to signing up a group of pharmacies</a>.--></p>
-
-      <p>If you have any questions, <a href="#">join a drop-in session with our onboarding team</a>.</p>
+      <p>If you have any questions, <a href="#">email us</a> or <a href="#">join a drop-in session</a>.</p>
 
     {{ button({
         text: "Continue",

app/views/apply/pharmacies.html

@@ -18,12 +18,26 @@
 
       <h1 class="nhsuk-heading-l">Select pharmacies</h1>
 
+      <p>You can sign up all your pharmacies at once or in batches.
+
       <p>There are {{ (pharmacies | length) + 7}} active pharmacies in your company according to the <a href="https://digital.nhs.uk/services/organisation-data-service">NHS Organisation Data Service</a> (ODS).</p>
 
-      <p>7 of them are already using RAVS and are not listed here.</p>
+      <p>Pharmacies already signed up to the Record a vaccination service (RAVS) are not listed below.</p>
+
+      {% call details({
+      summaryText: "Your 7 pharmacies already signed up to RAVS"
+      }) %}
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, AB10 0JW (FDW48)</p>
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, JD10 2JW (FXW46)</p>
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, TN10 0JW (FQW48)</p>
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, JD10 2JW (FZA46)</p>
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, NW5 0JW (FBW48)</p>
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, SE2 2JW (FNW46)</p>
+      <p>Asda Pharmacy, AB6 0JW (FMW48)</p>
+      {% endcall %}
 
       {% if (pharmacies | length) > 50 %}
-        <p>For larger chains, we recommend signing up pharmacies in batches based on how stores are managed in your organisation.</p>
+
       {% endif %}
 
       {% set items = [] %}