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我的修改内容和理由: 1. 修正了错别字: 将 “一给开源项目” 修改为 “一个开源项目”。 将 “饿想法” 修改为 “的想法”。 2. 调整语句流畅性: - 原文“BeforeIDieAchievements是一个平台,旨在帮助开发者参与开源项目并记录他们的人生目标”显得机械,我调整为“BeforeIDieAchievements 是一个平台,帮助开发者参与开源项目并记录人生目标”,更简洁。 原文“我们非常乐意收到你的来信”调整为“我们期待与你交流”,更加正式。 3. 此外还进行了语义的优化
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My modification content and reasons:
Corrected typos:
Changed “一给开源项目” to “一个开源项目”.
Changed “饿想法” to “的想法”.
Adjusted sentence fluency:
The original sentence “BeforeIDieAchievements是一个平台,旨在帮助开发者参与开源项目并记录他们的人生目标” sounded mechanical, so I changed it to “BeforeIDieAchievements 是一个平台,帮助开发者参与开源项目并记录人生目标” to make it more concise.
The original sentence “我们非常乐意收到你的来信” was adjusted to “我们期待与你交流” to sound more formal.
Additionally, I made some semantic optimizations.
我的修改内容和理由:
修正了错别字: 将 “一给开源项目” 修改为 “一个开源项目”。
将 “饿想法” 修改为 “的想法”。
调整语句流畅性:
此外还进行了语义的优化
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keyword: brief description of changeformat, using one of the following keywords:Feature- adds new or amends existing user-facing behavior.Chore- changes that have no user-facing value, refactors, dependency bumps, etc.Fix- bug fixes.Docs- fixing typos and adding new content.