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Co-authored-by: Casie Oxford <coxford@twilio.com>

Author: forstisabella

src/connections/delivery-overview.md

@@ -89,9 +89,9 @@ With Delivery Overview, you can verify that your source receives your events, th
 ## How can I configure alerts?
 During the Delivery Overview beta, you can use the Event Delivery alerting features (Delivery Alerts) by selecting the **Alerts** tab in the destination header. 
 
-Once you enable alerts, if the successful delivery rate of all events is less than the threshold percentage in the last 24 hours, you'll be notified through in-app notification and/or workspace email. 
+After you enable alerts, if the successful delivery rate of all events is less than the threshold percentage in the last 24 hours, you'll be notified through in-app notification and/or workspace email. 
 
-Please note that this is dependent on your [notification settings](/docs/segment-app/#segment-settings). For example, if the threshold is set to 99%, then you'll be notified each time less than 100% of events fail. 
+Note that this is dependent on your [notification settings](/docs/segment-app/#segment-settings). For example, if the threshold is set to 99%, then you'll be notified each time less than 100% of events fail. 
 
 
 ## Why is the Delivery Overview page only available for cloud-mode destinations? 

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/server/http-api/index.md

@@ -320,7 +320,7 @@ The Alias call has the following fields:
   {% include content/spec-field-user-id.md %}
 </table>
 
-For more details on the Alias call and payload, check out the [Segment Spec](/docs/connections/spec/alias/).
+For more details on the Alias call and payload, see the [Segment Spec](/docs/connections/spec/alias/).
 
 ## Historical import
 
@@ -476,6 +476,6 @@ When sending a HTTP call from a user's device, you can collect the IP address by
 
 1. Double check that you've set up the library correctly.
 
-2. Make sure that you're calling a Segment API method once the library is successfully installed—[Identify](#identify), [Track](#track), and so on.
+2. Make sure that you're calling a Segment API method after the library is successfully installed—[Identify](#identify), [Track](#track), and so on.
 
 {% include content/troubleshooting-server-integration.md %}