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@@ -15,15 +15,15 @@ title: Ready to Review - Hyper-Intelligent Pull Request Notification & Assignmen
         <img src="/assets/review-goose.png" alt="Ready to Review" class="support-hero-image" />
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-        <p class="support-hero-title">HYPER-INTELLIGENT PULL REQUEST NOTIFICATION & ASSIGNMENT SYSTEM - FOR OSS, STARTUPS, AND ENTERPRISES ALIKE</p>
-        <p class="support-hero-text">Perfectly timed, actionable notifications that keep your team in flow. A deterministic state engine that always knows whose turn it is, what's blocking progress, and who should act next. The right notification, at the right time, in the right place.</p>
+        <p class="support-hero-title">SMART PR NOTIFICATIONS THAT KNOW WHOSE TURN IT IS</p>
+        <p class="support-hero-text">Stop losing PRs in notification noise. Ready to Review tracks every pull request from open to merged, automatically assigning reviewers and notifying the right person only when they need to act. Keep your team in flow with perfectly timed, actionable notifications.</p>
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       <h2 style="margin-top: 0; color: #333;">The Problem</h2>
-      <p>GitHub's native PR flow creates ambiguity. Nobody knows whose turn it is. PRs sit for 4.5 days on average (industry standard). Engineers context-switch constantly. Managers ask "what's blocking this?" in every standup.</p>
+      <p>GitHub's native PR flow creates ambiguity. Nobody knows whose turn it is. PRs become lost and forgotten under the daily deluge of GitHub notifications that both enterprise and open-source users encounter. PRs sit for 4.5 days on average (industry standard). Engineers context-switch constantly. Managers ask "what's blocking this?" in every standup.</p>
 
       <p><strong>For a 20-person team, that's $1M annually in lost productivity.</strong> Or 2-3 engineers worth of capacity just... gone.</p>
 
@@ -51,21 +51,17 @@ title: Ready to Review - Hyper-Intelligent Pull Request Notification & Assignmen
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       <h2>How It Works</h2>
-      <p>A deterministic state machine tracks every PR in your organization—shepherding them from open to merged. At each stage, it knows what needs to happen next and who should do it.</p>
+      <p>Ready to Review acts like a traffic controller for your PRs—tracking each one from open to merged and automatically figuring out what needs to happen next and who should do it. If a PR needs a reviewer, we assign one. If someone needs to take action to move it forward, we ping them on Slack or their Desktop.</p>
 
       <h3>When a PR Opens</h3>
       <p>If the author or CODEOWNERS hasn't already assigned reviewers, the system does it automatically based on who actually touched the code. Git history shows who knows this code and who has recently contributed to it.</p>
 
-      <p>Workload gets balanced automatically. If someone already has 9 active PRs, they're skipped. Assignments respect timezones—reviewers in active hours get priority. Bots get filtered out.</p>
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-      <p>Result: The right people see it immediately.</p>
+      <p>Workload gets balanced automatically. If someone already has 9 active PRs, they're skipped. Assignments respect timezones—reviewers in active hours get priority. Bots get filtered out. The right people see it immediately.</p>
 
       <h3>During Review</h3>
       <p>Every PR shows exactly whose turn it is and what needs to happen next. The author needs to fix failing tests. The reviewer needs to approve changes. Someone needs to resolve merge conflicts. No ambiguity about who's responsible.</p>
 
-      <p>Perfectly timed notifications arrive only when the state changes—when CI fails, when review is requested, when changes get pushed. Not for every comment thread. Just when someone needs to act. This keeps developers in flow instead of constantly context-switching.</p>
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-      <p>Result: Engineers know what's blocking their work without asking in Slack or standups.</p>
+      <p>Smart notifications arrive only when the state changes—when CI fails, when review is requested, when changes get pushed. Not for every comment thread. Just when someone needs to act. This keeps developers in flow instead of constantly context-switching. Engineers know what's blocking their work without asking in Slack or standups.</p>
 
       <h3>Work Your Way — Multiple Integrations</h3>
       <p>Get notifications wherever you work:</p>
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         <li style="margin-bottom: 0; padding-left: 25px; position: relative;"><span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--cyan); font-weight: 700;">→</span><strong>Web dashboard</strong> — full visibility across all your PRs</li>
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-      <p>Daily reminders arrive at 8-9am in each person's local timezone, so nothing gets forgotten.</p>
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-      <p>Result: Nothing falls through the cracks, and you're notified in the tools you already use.</p>
+      <p>Daily reminders arrive at 8-9am in each person's local timezone, so nothing gets forgotten or falls through the cracks.</p>
 
       <h3>For More Information</h3>
       <p>Technical details, architecture diagrams, and API documentation: <a href="https://docs.ready-to-review.dev/">docs.ready-to-review.dev</a></p>
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       <p style="font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; margin-bottom: 15px; color: var(--white);">KEEP YOUR TEAM IN FLOW</p>
-      <p style="margin-bottom: 30px; font-size: 18px; color: var(--white);">Hyper-Intelligent Pull Request Notification & Assignment System - for OSS, Startups, and Enterprises alike - with perfectly timed notifications. Two-minute setup. Free for open source.</p>
+      <p style="margin-bottom: 30px; font-size: 18px; color: var(--white);">Smart PR management with perfectly timed notifications. One-minute setup. Free for open source.</p>
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         <a href="https://docs.ready-to-review.dev/getting-started/" class="cta-button cta-button--green">Get Started</a>
         <a href="https://calendar.app.google/TbQmeX8iWnvx6Ci89" class="cta-button">Schedule a Call</a>