minor improvements

tstromberg · tstromberg · commit e254e657761d · 2025-11-11T08:58:41.000-05:00
diff --git a/src/products/ready-to-review.njk b/src/products/ready-to-review.njk
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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-title: Ready to Review - PRs merge in an hour, not 4.5 days
+title: Ready to Review - Enterprise-grade PR Management
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 <section class="content-hero">
@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ title: Ready to Review - PRs merge in an hour, not 4.5 days
         <img src="/assets/review-goose.png" alt="Ready to Review" class="support-hero-image" />
       </picture>
       <div class="support-hero-content">
-        <p class="support-hero-title">PRs MERGE IN AN HOUR, NOT 4.5 DAYS</p>
-        <p class="support-hero-text">A deterministic state engine that shepherds pull requests to merge. Always knows whose turn it is. What's blocking progress. Who should act next.</p>
+        <p class="support-hero-title">ENTERPRISE-GRADE PR MANAGEMENT</p>
+        <p class="support-hero-text">Perfectly timed, actionable notifications that keep your team in flow. A deterministic state engine that always knows whose turn it is, what's blocking progress, and who should act next. The right notification, at the right time, in the right place.</p>
       </div>
     </div>
 
@@ -63,14 +63,22 @@ title: Ready to Review - PRs merge in an hour, not 4.5 days
       <h3>During Review</h3>
       <p>Every PR shows exactly whose turn it is and what needs to happen next. The author needs to fix failing tests. The reviewer needs to approve changes. Someone needs to resolve merge conflicts. No ambiguity about who's responsible.</p>
 
-      <p>Notifications go out only when the state changes—when CI fails, when review is requested, when changes get pushed. Not for every comment thread. Just when someone needs to act.</p>
+      <p>Perfectly timed notifications arrive only when the state changes—when CI fails, when review is requested, when changes get pushed. Not for every comment thread. Just when someone needs to act. This keeps developers in flow instead of constantly context-switching.</p>
 
       <p>Result: Engineers know what's blocking their work without asking in Slack or standups.</p>
 
-      <h3>Anytime</h3>
-      <p>Engineers can always see which work they're blocking by checking the dashboard, the Goose desktop app, or the Slack app. Daily reminders arrive at 8-9am in each person's local timezone, so nothing gets forgotten.</p>
+      <h3>Work Your Way — Multiple Integrations</h3>
+      <p>Get notifications wherever you work:</p>
+      <ul style="font-size: 16px; line-height: 1.8; margin: 15px 0; padding-left: 0; list-style: none;">
+        <li style="margin-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 25px; position: relative;"><span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--cyan); font-weight: 700;">→</span><strong>Slack integration</strong> — notifications arrive in your team's Slack workspace</li>
+        <li style="margin-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 25px; position: relative;"><span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--cyan); font-weight: 700;">→</span><strong>Desktop app (Goose)</strong> — menubar (Mac) or system tray (Windows/Linux) notifications</li>
+        <li style="margin-bottom: 10px; padding-left: 25px; position: relative;"><span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--cyan); font-weight: 700;">→</span><strong>Command-line interface</strong> — check PR status from your terminal</li>
+        <li style="margin-bottom: 0; padding-left: 25px; position: relative;"><span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--cyan); font-weight: 700;">→</span><strong>Web dashboard</strong> — full visibility across all your PRs</li>
+      </ul>
 
-      <p>Result: Nothing falls through the cracks.</p>
+      <p>Daily reminders arrive at 8-9am in each person's local timezone, so nothing gets forgotten.</p>
+
+      <p>Result: Nothing falls through the cracks, and you're notified in the tools you already use.</p>
 
       <h3>For More Information</h3>
       <p>Technical details, architecture diagrams, and API documentation: <a href="https://docs.ready-to-review.dev/">docs.ready-to-review.dev</a></p>
@@ -100,11 +108,12 @@ title: Ready to Review - PRs merge in an hour, not 4.5 days
           </div>
         </div>
         <div class="pricing-tier-body">
-          <p class="pricing-tier-description">For open-source projects</p>
+          <p class="pricing-tier-description">For open-source projects — free forever</p>
           <ul class="pricing-features">
             <li>Automated reviewer assignments</li>
             <li>Turn-based PR tracking</li>
-            <li>Real-time notifications</li>
+            <li>Perfectly timed notifications</li>
+            <li>All integrations (Slack, Desktop, CLI)</li>
             <li>Analytics & leaderboard</li>
           </ul>
         </div>
@@ -168,8 +177,8 @@ title: Ready to Review - PRs merge in an hour, not 4.5 days
     </div>
 
     <div class="groove-card groove-card--yellow" style="text-align: center; padding: 40px; margin-top: 50px;">
-      <p style="font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; margin-bottom: 15px; color: var(--white);">RECLAIM 10-15% OF YOUR TEAM'S THROUGHPUT</p>
-      <p style="margin-bottom: 30px; font-size: 18px; color: var(--white);">Two-minute setup. Works with your existing workflow. Free for open source.</p>
+      <p style="font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; margin-bottom: 15px; color: var(--white);">KEEP YOUR TEAM IN FLOW</p>
+      <p style="margin-bottom: 30px; font-size: 18px; color: var(--white);">Enterprise-grade PR management with perfectly timed notifications. Two-minute setup. Free for open source.</p>
       <div style="display: flex; gap: 16px; justify-content: center; flex-wrap: wrap;">
         <a href="https://docs.ready-to-review.dev/getting-started/" class="cta-button cta-button--green">Get Started</a>
         <a href="https://calendar.app.google/TbQmeX8iWnvx6Ci89" class="cta-button">Schedule a Call</a>
diff --git a/src/qr/index.njk b/src/qr/index.njk
@@ -15,34 +15,60 @@ title: Welcome
         <div style="flex: 1; min-width: 250px;">
           <p style="margin: 0 0 10px 0; font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; color: #333;">DUDE, YOU'RE AT KUBECON TOO?</p>
           <p style="margin: 0 0 15px 0; font-size: 18px; color: #333;">THANKS FOR SCANNING THE QR CODE.</p>
-          <p style="margin: 0; font-size: 16px; line-height: 1.5; color: #333;">Welcome! We're former Kubernetes contributors who got tired of high PR review latency - so we built a company to help companies and OSS projects merge code 20X faster. Thanks for scanning our QR code!</p>
+          <p style="margin: 0; font-size: 16px; line-height: 1.5; color: #333;">Built by former Kubernetes contributors who got tired of waiting days for PR reviews. We're on a mission to eliminate code review latency—helping teams merge code 20X faster while keeping developers in flow.</p>
         </div>
       </div>
     </div>
 
-    <div style="background: var(--black); border: 8px solid var(--cyan); border-radius: 20px; padding: 30px; margin: 40px 0; box-shadow: 0 8px 24px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.4);">
-      <h2 style="margin-top: 0;">WHERE TO START</h2>
+    <div style="background: var(--black); border: 8px solid var(--yellow); border-radius: 20px; padding: 40px; margin: 40px 0; box-shadow: 0 8px 24px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.4);">
+      <h2 style="margin-top: 0; color: var(--yellow); font-size: 32px;">Ready to Review</h2>
+      <p style="font-size: 20px; font-weight: 600; color: var(--cyan); margin-bottom: 20px;">Enterprise-grade GitHub pull request management.</p>
+      <p style="font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.6; margin-bottom: 20px;">Perfectly timed, actionable notifications that keep your team in flow. The right notification, at the right time, in the right place.</p>
 
-      <div style="margin-bottom: 30px;">
-        <h3 style="margin-bottom: 10px; color: var(--yellow); padding-bottom: 8px; border-bottom: 3px solid var(--yellow); display: inline-block;">For Open Source Enthusiasts</h3>
-        <p>Want to see what we're building? Check out <strong><a href="https://github.com/codeGROOVE-dev/goose">Goose</a></strong> — our PR tracker that honks when you're the bottleneck.</p>
-        <p style="margin-bottom: 0;">All our open source projects are free forever. <a href="/opensource/">Learn more about our OSS commitment</a></p>
+      <div style="margin: 30px 0;">
+        <h3 style="margin-bottom: 15px; color: var(--cyan); font-size: 22px;">Why Teams Choose Us</h3>
+        <ul style="font-size: 17px; line-height: 1.8; margin: 0; padding-left: 0; list-style: none;">
+          <li style="margin-bottom: 12px; padding-left: 30px; position: relative;">
+            <span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--yellow); font-weight: 700;">✓</span>
+            <strong>Always know whose turn it is</strong> — deterministic state tracking eliminates ambiguity
+          </li>
+          <li style="margin-bottom: 12px; padding-left: 30px; position: relative;">
+            <span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--yellow); font-weight: 700;">✓</span>
+            <strong>Stay in flow</strong> — get notified only when action is needed, not for every comment
+          </li>
+          <li style="margin-bottom: 12px; padding-left: 30px; position: relative;">
+            <span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--yellow); font-weight: 700;">✓</span>
+            <strong>Work your way</strong> — Slack, Desktop (menubar/tray), or command-line integrations
+          </li>
+          <li style="margin-bottom: 0; padding-left: 30px; position: relative;">
+            <span style="position: absolute; left: 0; color: var(--yellow); font-weight: 700;">✓</span>
+            <strong>Free for open source</strong> — forever, no strings attached
+          </li>
+        </ul>
       </div>
 
+      <div style="text-align: center; margin-top: 35px;">
+        <a href="/products/ready-to-review/" class="cta-button cta-button--green" style="font-size: 18px; padding: 16px 32px;">Learn More & Get Started</a>
+      </div>
+    </div>
+
+    <div style="background: var(--black); border: 8px solid var(--cyan); border-radius: 20px; padding: 30px; margin: 40px 0; box-shadow: 0 8px 24px rgba(0, 0, 0, 0.4);">
+      <h2 style="margin-top: 0;">EXPLORE MORE</h2>
+
       <div style="margin-bottom: 30px;">
-        <h3 style="margin-bottom: 10px; color: var(--yellow); padding-bottom: 8px; border-bottom: 3px solid var(--yellow); display: inline-block;">Measure Your PR Latency Cost</h3>
-        <p>Curious how much PR latency is costing your organization? Try our free tool to measure the cost of PR latency for your GitHub org:</p>
-        <p style="margin-bottom: 0;"><strong><a href="https://cost.github.codegroove.app/?mode=org">cost.github.codegroove.app</a></strong></p>
+        <h3 style="margin-bottom: 10px; color: var(--yellow); padding-bottom: 8px; border-bottom: 3px solid var(--yellow); display: inline-block;">Try the Desktop App</h3>
+        <p>Check out <strong><a href="https://github.com/codeGROOVE-dev/goose">Goose</a></strong> — our open-source PR notification app that lives in your menubar (Mac) or system tray (Windows/Linux). Honks when it's your turn to act.</p>
+        <p style="margin-bottom: 0;">Open source forever. <a href="/opensource/">Learn more about our OSS commitment</a></p>
       </div>
 
       <div style="margin-bottom: 0;">
-        <h3 style="margin-bottom: 10px; color: var(--yellow); padding-bottom: 8px; border-bottom: 3px solid var(--yellow); display: inline-block;">For Teams</h3>
-        <p>Merge PRs 20X faster with our flagship product.</p>
-        <p style="margin-bottom: 0;"><a href="/products/">Explore our products</a></p>
+        <h3 style="margin-bottom: 10px; color: var(--yellow); padding-bottom: 8px; border-bottom: 3px solid var(--yellow); display: inline-block;">Calculate Your Savings</h3>
+        <p>Curious how much PR latency is costing your team? Our free calculator analyzes your GitHub org's public repositories and shows the real cost of context switching.</p>
+        <p style="margin-bottom: 0;"><strong><a href="https://cost.github.codegroove.app/?mode=org">cost.github.codegroove.app</a></strong></p>
       </div>
     </div>
 
     <h2>GET IN TOUCH</h2>
-    <p>Questions? Email us at <a href="mailto:go-faster@codegroove.dev">go-faster@codegroove.dev</a></p>
+    <p>Questions? Want to chat? Email us at <a href="mailto:go-faster@codegroove.dev">go-faster@codegroove.dev</a> or <a href="https://calendar.app.google/TbQmeX8iWnvx6Ci89">schedule a call</a>.</p>
   </div>
 </section>
