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 \subsection{Pooling: an already tested idea}
 The idea to pool resources in specific areas within an organisation is not new.
-For example, similar arguments can and have been made for research data support.
+In industry, software engineering underwent a similar transition about 20 years ago, with the creation of specialised, central software development units.
+In an example from academia, similar arguments can and have been made for research data support.
 
 \subsubsection{Research data management}
 Both data and software play a fundamental role in almost all of research.